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The chart below shows average weekly rent for apartment and houses in four Australian cities in 2016 and 2017.

主體段分段方法：

主體1：Sydney，Melbourne（上升趨勢）

主體2：Brisbane、Perth（下降趨勢）

開頭段

The bar charts compare the average weekly rental costs for apartments and houses in four Australian cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Perth) in 2016 and 2017.

概述段

Overall, house rents were more expensive than apartment rents across all four cities.Meanwhile, Sydneyconsistently had the highest rental costsfor both types of accommodation,whilePerthhad the lowest rentsthroughout the given period.

思路要點：

- 四個城市的house租金都高于apartment租金

- 兩年內(nèi)，Sydney的apartment和house租金都最高，但Perth都最低

Body paragraph 1

Two cities saw a rising trend in rental costs. Specifically,Sydneyranked the top, with the average cost of apartmentsrising slightlyfrom $520 to $530,whilethat of housesgrowing remarkablyfrom $520 to $550. Melbournefollowed a similar trend,withapartment rentsrising modestlyfrom $390 to $405 and house rentsincreasingfrom $400 to $420.

思路要點：Sydney，Melbourne

- 這兩個城市的租金都呈上升趨勢

- Sydney：apartment和house租金都最高，apartment租金 由$520 小幅上升到$530，house租金由 $520 小幅上升到$550

- Melbourne：呈現(xiàn)類似趨勢；apartment和house租金分別為由$390小幅上升到$405、$400 到$420

Body paragraph 2

By contrast, Perthsaw a decreasein rents for both housing types. Its weekly cost for apartmentsdropped moderatelyfrom $310 in 2016 to $300 in 2017,whereashouse rentsfell significantlyfrom $400 to $350 over the same period.In addition, Brisbane was the only city tomaintain stable rent levels,staying at$380 for apartments and $400 for houses.

思路要點：Perth，Brisbane

- Perth：兩種住房租金都下降；apartment租金從$310小幅下降到$300，house租金從$400顯著下降到$350

- Brisbane：兩種租房租金保持平穩(wěn)，分別為 $380和 $400