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The table below shows the number of visitors going to the heritage sites in six regions in the Australia from 1996 to 2000.

主體段分段方法：按照【變化幅度】分段

主體1：New South Wales、Tasmania (變化顯著)

主體2：其余四個(gè)地區(qū)（變化幅度較小）

開頭段

The table provides information on the number of tourists visiting heritage sites across six regions in Australia over three years: 1996, 1998, and 2000.

概述段

Overall, all six statesexperienced an increasein the number of visitors to heritage sites,withNew South Walesexhibiting the most notable growth.In contrast, tourist attractions in Tasmaniaremained the least visitedthroughout the period.

思路要點(diǎn)：

- 六個(gè)地區(qū)游客量都上升

- New South Wales漲幅最大

- Tasmania數(shù)值始終最低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear that two regions recorded significant changes in visitor numbers. In New South Wales, merely 23,000 tourists visited cultural sites in 1996,butthis figuresurgedto 458,000 after two years,overtakingall the other regions andbecoming the most visited state. The final two years(1998 to 2000)saw a marginal climbto 492,000.Similarly, the number of visitors to Tasmania, whichstarted at94,000 in 1996,underwent a steady increase, rising to120,000 by 2000.

思路要點(diǎn)：New South Wales、Tasmania

- New South Wales：1996年游客數(shù)量僅為23,000→1998年急劇上升到458,000，成為六個(gè)地區(qū)中游客數(shù)量最多的地區(qū)→到2000年小幅度上升到492,000

- Tasmania：1996年的94,000 in 1996→逐步上升到2000年達(dá)到120,000

Body paragraph 2

However, such dramatic changes were not observed in the remaining four areas.In Victoria and Queensland, the number of visitorsincreased by roughly 6000,reaching453,000 and 417,000 by 2000.In contrast,there was a slower growthin South Australia and Western Australia,withtourist numbersrisingfrom 225,000 to 261,000 and from 189,000 to 224,000 respectively.

思路要點(diǎn)：其余四個(gè)地區(qū)

- 其余四個(gè)地區(qū)游客數(shù)量變化幅度較小

- Victoria、Queensland：都持續(xù)上升了6000左右，到2000年分別達(dá)到453,000和417,000

- South Australia、Western Australia：上升幅度都較小，分別從225,000 上升到261,000、從189,000 上升到224,000.

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