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The maps below show the layout of an Australian market Garden in 1995 and now.

主體段分段方法：按照 <方位> 分段

主體1：南邊、中間

主體2：北邊

開頭段

The maps illustrate changes in a market called Garden Market in Australia, comparing its layout in 1995 with the present day.

概述段

Overall, this markethas experienced significant changesover the period shown. Withincreased mechanizationandthe introduction of new crops, ithas developed into a more modernized facility.

思路要點：

- 變化顯著

- 新增許多機械化裝備、引進新農(nóng)作物品種，整個區(qū)域更加現(xiàn)代化

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatthis marketoccupies a rectangular area, surrounded bygreen landto the north and east.In the southwestern corner, a storage shedhas been converted intoa house. The small cottageto its righthas been removed to make space fora tractor parking area,just belowa new herb field.Further to the rightwas a larger farmhouse, whichremains unchangedin the present plan.In the central section, a former strawberry fieldhas been completely replaced bybeans.Similarly, the apple fieldto its easthas been transformed intoa glasshouse.

思路要點：南邊、中間

- 給定區(qū)域呈現(xiàn)長方形，北邊、東邊有綠植

- 西南角：storage shed (被改建成house)；其右邊的cottage被改建成tractor的停車場，位于herb南邊；再東邊是一個較大的farmhouse，現(xiàn)在不變

- 中央地帶：strawberry被替代為beans；其右邊的apple被替換為glasshouse

Body paragraph 2

In the northern section, there was a strawberry field inthe top-left cornerin 1995, with areas for workers and tomatoesto its right. Now,althoughthe strawberry sectionremains largely unchanged,more tractorsare placed in the northeastern cornerfor harvesting, occupying the initial worker's are.Similarly, a larger field for herbs has replaced the former tomato area.

思路要點：北邊

- 西北角原先是strawberry，現(xiàn)在保持不變

- 右邊是manual labor和tomatoes，被tractors和herbs取代

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